
I Am Bad!
By: Brittney Hammond
By: Brittney Hammond
These poor, pitiful kids what have I done?
How could I hold them in like this?
I feel terrible, I feel dirty.
Why did I get chosen to do this?
I can’t take it I need to let them go
But what happens to me if I do let them go
Could I get hurt? I would think not I am
a barbed wire fence.
The only thing they can do to me is
tare me down.
But if they do that then they will have no
one to keep the other prisoners in.
Please someone tell me what to do
I cant keep doing this it is killing me
I need help I have feelings to you know
Even though I am a barbed wire fence.
I am confused I don’t know what to do
Someone guide me please. I am done.
I have nothing else to do but stand here
High above the children that is so sad.
There is nothing I can do
I am now done I give up
I must hold them in and hurt.
I feel terrible, I feel dirty.
1 comment:
Good overall. I definitely get the sense that the barbed wire feels awful for its role. Could use more specifics about what it sees, hears, etc.
Well written. 32/35 points for this one.
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